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Re: The Ghost of Sently Lake

Post by [xo] heartbreaker on Wed Nov 26, 2008 1:35 pm

Capitalization
Punctuation
Too fast (I would really start over with chapter one)
Too short.

Those are the things I find wrong.
But once again, its a great idea and interesting.

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Re: The Ghost of Sently Lake

Post by JScutie on Wed Nov 26, 2008 2:20 pm

thanks

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