follow the RAINBOW

Chapter 1;;
I got up and smelled the fresh air coming from my window. I hear the birds chirping, and the near-by waterfall falling. And after a soft drop of rain and crickets chirping last night, a beautiful rainbow comes out. Like everyday. The clouds are white, the grass is pure green.
But anyway, I am a 15 year old girl. I only live with my mom. My dad is on a business trip, for a long long time. 3 months. I miss him so much.
My name is Adriel. And I am accually pretty new here. I moved here 1 year ago... I didn't really make much friends. After school I always go outside in the shade and do my homework. After that I just... explore.
My moms name is Ellie. I love her... she does so much.
Tomarrow is school; today is Sunday. I got dressed, brushed my hair, got clean took a little shower and I went outside. I thought about making new friends tomarrow. I want to find someone who is like me.

I got my backbag filled with loads of stuff. Color pencils, paper, camera... I like to draw and stuff.
I got my flipflops on, and went outside. My mom is still sleeping, but it doesn't matter. I go outside everyday. Today I felt like going to the waterfall.
Wow.. i thought. It was so pretty.
"Hey, your from our school, right?"
someone had said.
"Uh, yes?" I said. I turned around, and I did reconize the face..
"Hey, you in my class! Cool." I said.
"Heh, yeah, that is. Its pretty weird that we met here also." She said. "Oh, what am I thinking. My name is Kenzie. Nice to finally meet you."
"Ha, yep. .. Nice to meet you, Kenzie. My name is Adriel, as you might know.." I said.
"Yes. Now I need to go. See you, tomarrow, right?"
"Yes, ... tomarrow. See you then.."

Wow, a new friend, finally, heh. The only thing weird about her was her eyes. They looked kinda... rainbow-ish. Weird. But maybe that was just me.

Chapter 2;;
When Kenzie left I was still there and watching the waterfall. I wondered about the rainbow eyes she had. But I still think that is pretty weird, Contacts? Maybe...
But I tried to forget about that. I took out my paint brushes and a piece of paper, and started painting the waterfall. Although it is kinda small, it turned out pretty well. My mom always used to say I had the talent of a artist.

I felt proud..
I took my painting, blew on it a little, washed my brushes and went back home.

"Whoaoaoa!!" I yelled, softly..
I triped, and this long large stick. It accually, almost looked like a big brown arrow.. It was pointing to this big ... entrance? Well, there was a lot of trees, and bushes, and some fountains... hmm, maybe I could even do some paintings. But... I never saw this when I passed it the first time, why am I seeing it now?
I walked in... hearing the birds. I aslo heard some whispering.. I looked behind me very fast and turned back... I kept walking. I finally noticed that there where sooo much rainbows. I quickly took out my camera and took a picture.
"Hey!" a strange voice said. I looked around and saw the back of a girl running away. I realized I had heard that voice before.
I quickly ran out, planning to come here again tomorrow. I didn't feel comfterbale telling anybody about... well, lets just call it rainbow forest.

Chapter 3;;
I walked into my house and saw my mom sleeping. I tiptoed upstairs and got on the computer..
I typed in
"rainbow forest"
and clicked search. This is what it had said.
'You typed in rainbow forest. 1 article has come up. '
'RAINBOW FOREST'
*click*
'The rainbow forest is located in the rainbow town, known as Captured B town. A lot of people say that the B stands for beautiful. And it is, because rainbows go everywhere, no storms and its just perfect. There is a rainbow , like, jungle out there. but all know its just a myth.

Comments;
YA it is! a rainbow forest? COME ON!
well no duh
it was interesting reading this, but it doesn't exist.
so fake.. '

WOW! and i found it? idk. maybe it was just my imagination. I am going there tonight, no matter what .

Its 1:00am now. I am going to go.
I went outside quietly - no flash light, just my lucky umrella.
i walked in there - a rainbow appeared, the sun came out only there, the skies are blue, it was amazing. I walked under the rainbow, and sweet rainbow candies fell. I ate them, and giggled a bit.

a smile went around my face.
Then a voice welcoming me came out.

Chapter 4;;
"Welcome to rainbow forest!!"
"Um, thanks, Its very pretty here." I said.
I turned around, and it was Kenzie...
"*gasp* Kenzie?!" I said
"Adriel?! Um, uh... yeah.." she said.
"I knew something was weird about her, abd her eyes!" I whispered.
"Whats that?" she said.
"Oh, nothing... its just, uh, you had rainbow eyes.."
"Um, yes. Look, we arn't very huminish... if that is a word." She giggled a bit, and so did I. I was pretty surprised, and confuzed at the same time. Not that much a human??
"Heh, its not a word.. but keep going."
"Well, its a lonh story. All I can say is you won't see me at school sometimes. I live here. And something bad might happen soon." She said. When she said the last sentence, she sounded worried, and I was a bit shocked? I don't know..
"Something... BAD?" I asked.
"Yes. Forget it, though.." She replied.
"Whatever you said, Kenzie..."

I walked away, turning back to look at Kenzie. I only did once, though. She was staring at me. I don't know what emotion she had. But I do know mine. A bit scared, worried, confuzed, and some part unknown.
I walked back to my house, and when I got there, my mom made me some toast. I sat down.
"Thanks, mom."
"Well, you looked hungry. And anyway, I made two thinking I would eat both, but I didn't!" We both laughed , softly.
"Mmm. this is good! Thanks again."
My mom smiled as I walked up stairs. It got dark, and I felt tired. I got in my pajamas, said good night to my mom, and went to sleep.. hoping nothing would happen.

Chapter 5;;
I woke up, and looked outside to see the rainbow. But I didn't see it.. I saw the clock and it was 5:00am. I suddenly heard thunder and saw lightning. Rain was pouring HARD. I quickly got out my raincoat and umbrella. Storms never usually happen here...
i went into the rainbow forest and Kenzie and her family were standing there, waiting for me.
"We were expecting you." They said.
"Uh yeah well whats going on." I said. We all heard thunder and lighting, and Kenzie's family took me; inside theie little house.
"Bad things." Kenzie said.
"Please, just explain."
It is just a storm, but Kenzie mentioned bad things happening yesterday. Thats why I am worried.
"Uh, yeah. In our world, its always beautiful." Her mom said.
"...why?"
"The dark side."
"Can you just tell me the WHOLE thing?" I said in a bad mood.
"Well, um, the dark side.. err, has creatures, weird ones, changes weather, and tries to harm you, humans, and us, the most. The leaders name is, 'Dark'. Ha, its kinda funny, his name is really lame... but anyway, he wants to be the "Ruler if the world!" he says. Yes we stopped him with our.. powers for over 2 years now. But he has gotten stronger. And stronger." Kenzie said, dropping her head.
"Wow. .. uh, could i help? Or should I stand back?" I asked.
"You. Help." They all said.

Chapter 6;;
"Umm,; alright?" I said. I accually wasn't hoping for that answer.
"Gooood. " Kenzie said, smiling.
"Ok, so now what...? I go off to him and say, "stop," or what?"
"Get powers, how else?"
"Uhh... say stop?"
She looked at me with a serious face.
"What?" I said, looking up.
"Look, this is serious. If you want to say stop, uh, sure, go, but don't get him angry. but you don't even know where he is. Ha. But, if you want POWERS, which everyone wants, meet me here tomarrow, 4:00am SHARP." Kenzie said.
"Deal. I'll go home and set my alarm clock."
"Alrightydoo, until then."

I walked away, turning back to look at them a couple times.
I had a few quetions on my mind.
What powers?
Whats going on?
Is this a dream?

I couldn't understand. Neither tell anybody.

I got back home.
"Hey, mom! What's cooking?" I said, acting happy and normal.
"Oh, cinnamon bread! Come and get some!"
I laughed a bit, "Thanks, mom." I smiled.
I ate some cinnamin bread. then I set my alarm clock. 4:00 sharp;; I thought.
I got ready for bed; thinking about tomarrow. Hoping that this was I dream, because if it wasn't, well, ... I don't know.
I don't know whats going to happen, to me, to them, to anybody.

[Do you like?]

i still need to add more =D

Holy crap thats long

LOL =DD

its 5 chappies =D

I agree with alex.

I really like it!
One comment, im a tough critic.
The first chapter was soft and beautiful.The rest were the same,but then it turned fairy tale in a second.
Like:
I woke up today feling the same. then someone gave me a cake. It was my birthday.

NO HARD FEELINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVED THE STORY IN EVERY WAY POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!

well thanks anyway! xD

Dont mention it. Its a great idea for a movie made for kids definately

that means a lot

do u guys want me to write more?

TOTALLY!!!!!!!!!!!
Its an awesome start... I cant wait to see what happens next!